【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. l( G& K: M9 N, T, d6 \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% J4 e2 L7 j; n' gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 C1 C3 [+ T2 \" EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 s4 {$ C: P8 c9 \) S, lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 g" C0 c  b2 x. Y; ^9 D! kYou needn’t fear anything
- t3 \  Q9 Q8 N: H; q" x' U/ QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 e( L7 @& k: E* ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ I! }* _* g4 F* E7 s6 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  V# z9 a. x$ H! kI regret not dying
' S: r, L! m. s- U0 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ m( Q$ Z' c8 HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% \: A, \9 I9 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  T% {4 E9 j. ~! c, h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  w' O0 [4 y0 z: ?- [+ |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 V# g* t' v6 v& w5 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ J' b7 W- R9 p. X% m) a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 `8 j, _2 y: p. u0 T" ]/ I( s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- G; K" s+ N  P; O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 F5 ]2 N$ V4 E" T6 X1 {$ ?* A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ^5 u" z8 H4 y; e. I' G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 v( Y9 R: B* C! R8 Y7 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: }7 \6 S0 n. V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% [( x; u2 g  s; P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 e6 P0 {* W" Z* k4 k9 g" x8 y4 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  U& u6 I* a& Y/ h0 y3 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 O6 N7 e5 q3 U/ X* c+ r! f7 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 r' \# w  K6 M1 |3 j  U* w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# J6 a9 p; {. W9 n& l  S# J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# }* w5 l( h+ i3 y! q* ^) \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. h+ j/ b0 Z- ^6 Q, i6 J: V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' m4 V. D# E3 K. K+ Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 Q# {# m3 m- L# R! M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 M' d; N6 A+ S- w3 H0 e* s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  t1 E( F( h, N' w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 T! f& B- L( i5 n/ G' D5 y* ~; ?/ c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ V/ d6 E0 i1 I# {+ L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 z8 |, g; E7 T/ U1 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# E2 p+ M) C5 g4 G5 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) o. I# r3 W0 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& y" L; E3 J) f- P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ _7 k/ R+ P, u+ U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 X5 }& r$ _* j- y" g; ^我请你剖开它

2 _9 X) N+ z9 @+ f  B# e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, h* s' g1 _+ K$ I! M  u7 [+ h0 L% u0 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>