【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: r- k& Y! W1 i6 j5 v/ j歌词我附在后面。
! |0 y, p& z% a/ ?0 w, S) ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) c$ w: c! W- k/ h* N, kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 p9 Y3 l: [: _6 Q5 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 r4 K, c$ h. r3 C( rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 C  i9 o( a$ v/ K1 B" U& aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- K' j& z. c6 o8 u2 L7 P3 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! a/ b4 V! n# c- P$ h* tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 b  s5 T1 {' F) ]I want so much to see inside your heart
  Z  x9 G) B: Z" oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 \  C1 }: Y% r: W; ?! s8 ]( Q) G; OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 `5 @3 k. b$ x! H4 f# DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* W8 [) J" h; @  V7 t1 P; oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- y( A, h4 R. D# NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  y7 C- K" p! ]- Q% o7 v  k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 y4 B, ~) A6 n- t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# R% v# I$ B- N: e# }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 C% e- [, r/ O' s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  x2 v6 T' ?% [, D0 [( R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 t6 c/ ~% ~0 K" Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 C, ~3 O2 ?& ?: O; B) g: J9 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' m! ]! c, F% Q. O6 K" ]0 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 c% y/ D% b, f6 a5 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ t' U0 O$ k/ H2 `2 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 |) j2 H- ~0 z/ Y5 B5 w- i, Z+ i/ U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, o- Y$ X/ o1 ^' o2 O9 [6 W3 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% i* X  h" j1 U4 s# |: f- j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 X6 @8 V& w" L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" P  g' X+ g2 `% x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Y) b0 w9 K2 o* S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% o2 ~% N6 ]; c# m3 W1 h8 T( L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  x# Q6 H) f4 W+ f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  m3 G+ ^3 [% i) K9 |& i2 |# X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 _- _4 j3 |6 o, G: z: \/ S1 z" v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. E+ N3 V- R; Y5 R! h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% `" l6 \0 I/ i" {+ ]& l+ b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ O) E' a7 y; \/ K" K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; j: S- R" V1 p3 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ Y0 D3 I$ _" k6 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 S4 ~  y0 ]8 Y) w4 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 q% A: X8 q6 _; t; x- z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 P7 k' p6 G  ~' C3 K. c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* Q' r' m3 e6 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ S9 A" q5 A8 H6 E* ^  Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ @2 n" T5 P0 ?  q% }* c: d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) u, \2 \5 e. ?( i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>