【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: r7 W5 _1 q. nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) P  @1 I! P: [4 o6 a4 ]4 d7 uBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 a+ S& u! ]6 h$ a! o- ~2 MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' x4 K) X6 h0 G2 \$ I5 @. YI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ Y7 t7 I; e% sBut I never did
4 `' }1 T- g) iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* _$ p% ~2 h  p/ eEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 [7 W- C) K1 i0 }' l" S/ j* ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# K7 F3 h3 L7 _* u, }5 [/ DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: y4 q( ]% g7 R! NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 h* f0 v( e' M; s( n; o/ C5 gEntrust my love within your heart

, e6 a+ q2 T9 G5 n' L2 X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 f4 L4 O3 H% o8 _3 u" H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 r/ Y- E8 p  R+ U8 [) R& O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 i8 n8 }% O. |9 b<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. n7 {1 [$ R; I" z5 l. e) j+ \2 Z% N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! X  H0 ~. [3 s3 \) h' s/ |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 w% Q% z/ J6 r8 f0 y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( U: G8 Z4 J& F4 D" e% t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  x$ s- t3 K; H( e  S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 v2 T) \2 K' P) J+ @! Z1 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 f9 c1 W; M# D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( x$ h4 Z: D% d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; O6 l' A2 ?* B4 ?  i8 R3 N; |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. H4 x: @7 O+ u  O2 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ n4 F) z8 F$ {4 j+ }2 R5 [, z- E/ T; x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. u5 t/ a+ f, X5 I) d( p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ o0 @$ m# ]  n' J/ x( ^6 z! Y$ b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" j7 O5 g# f1 T7 }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* G' r, _) g' k7 t: J0 Q: a<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ y# b+ d+ z/ _0 C6 V% b) ?7 e; ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! I2 W7 Q' m; {7 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* a" {4 J: _6 h5 |  A7 j8 C! T& r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) o, r& `1 O1 d6 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* C0 F' Z: g3 U1 r* Y) @* i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( Z0 Q! j. \+ r. F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 v0 ]4 [8 }$ \6 V  \# o4 n1 |; G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( l9 {  J  `  h/ H0 x6 d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* Q6 L  g. s  @1 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ Y5 W" w9 V, F, P0 l 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 h9 {) a* f- F! C6 W$ a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ Q: R6 L0 ~( {" O7 |0 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# K$ _6 U% X5 E5 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 i5 @4 W" ~5 l! L7 }/ A6 A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>