【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& `, r3 l6 P9 p& M3 y5 RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# G( s" ^6 b2 j) {" f3 dWe meet and talk everyday,
: j7 d+ j5 I) [1 k/ U* {$ _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 N4 X1 g* m# EI would probably know how you feel
/ U$ l- P; i3 w1 z! v' SLove… just the word love
$ d, Q& e/ q* x& YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 O3 x* f" Z& g6 {. \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; i/ g, N/ g/ S* Y; i& cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 w$ D5 W8 X) B+ `( xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 Y0 N+ b2 O5 b& E7 X0 C4 mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ z1 c5 R; i4 y+ FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 x- X5 f* X! _4 N, K* VIf today isn’t too late,
+ g7 Y7 v* c  O; \$ H) {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# N) \0 j0 \) g& ~) bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 o& w$ H) S# G5 J, o6 zEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 n  T1 |4 i' [& K: cEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ g! u% f+ i0 Y+ \1 ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* B' _# |, u; ?' `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: M. g+ K- n. ^  p7 [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% I. y" F9 }9 L- q4 t, ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. @9 g! o9 D7 C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 g6 D# e  o* K- b# ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 e. C  \8 m% T- f# S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% Z2 s) a) a# Y( @' S6 X4 L9 k! m<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" N9 g# v3 w+ j& `5 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 B  V, Y, l4 L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. ^3 L% ~$ q2 M! Q% v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; L4 M+ c/ i, I' c6 v' E6 T( J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( n5 e; B6 R7 D. f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 ], ~- k) y- @$ w& e5 ~! D+ N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! k- d( x% G7 N* Z% L$ N/ M<P>But I never did </P>
# l& D3 _  ~1 v9 a( e5 u<P>但我不会 </P>
$ E+ u0 D( L; c# ?" D; S$ ], V1 K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 O- o9 q" n) f6 v. a2 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 Z; r4 W0 K: E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 ~; I" _2 J" A; Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, O; s# E; r; P3 m$ q6 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 t$ @2 v0 l/ b1 U) F5 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" R2 B7 P! C- I' L5 S0 ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& x: y& ^  e& ?/ J2 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& y8 `1 ]! e; A4 d" m( |7 M, k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 d9 \2 M. p% Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 f% h" a3 w1 b- T 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* a" {0 a  e0 N9 j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' B/ C, a1 ?8 C7 N+ r7 i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>