【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( O- r" ~9 {  b+ S0 }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 l* c8 F$ U, Q% [% N4 @0 `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, _. S# [, F/ a: sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. @/ b. n  Y3 @; y5 r. C$ m# VWhy is it so difficult to express?
. t4 i9 N# V0 C. ]/ ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' @! P, @" l" ~6 wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: r, i3 z/ C/ _" XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' z/ P8 X/ A2 o( l3 H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ N1 t: h- [% s  m+ _1 A0 i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; O( g' D1 h9 z8 d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 D) m) {4 t+ Y: Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! L$ m! D. p3 O! ?: m7 w, [4 m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ B5 S5 C# n" D3 f<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 \. t5 t0 Z, A" F# z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( W7 q+ j5 [) Z4 @% {6 {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 T+ |$ A& c, M. h- V: R4 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, c' J2 u" W" l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ k' V$ w2 t6 O8 z, a9 Z7 i' u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! v( P( L& i% K0 C% Q0 e7 c<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 u" N4 {! v3 o7 I5 ]" F1 a) i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 C' V& d' K- A! |7 Y0 a( G8 \/ W<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" B7 I* Y; `+ X$ y% s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: X% P3 n6 |) e7 n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& i7 G3 P" K! V# f. O2 {% k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ y7 G' K, Y  y1 S1 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 o; B2 p+ V" x4 J  W, h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 |" c+ D+ `& D3 Q& X3 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 {8 X+ x% L  W, F0 c0 z3 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  h1 a/ u$ j# r7 W% T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' W; b7 N) A* j0 i4 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' m; @3 W: I. Y7 F$ m: R0 |- z; h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" f" l0 k+ J# f1 S; |2 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% Y# n) U( w+ W<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 ^0 z' ]8 {# \; }7 e6 N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# B5 W1 I2 P# s* t4 O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ?" p& T8 h3 ~, G' d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 Z( E+ r4 y. A8 ]- X2 z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, S& ?5 y3 U" D4 g2 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* s* H6 [8 i- ^, \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ p" b, B3 d4 U$ z2 U, N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 n! c, K" R8 Y0 L% ~2 ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 c) X' d, v& B5 I" U/ f; P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 \) ?0 r( T, F/ m& ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>